Thursday 4 June 2015

Class pet

      Class pet

Dear Whaea Alice

I think we should have a class pet because I think that our class could be responsible and look after the class pet. I think we should have one of these to have as a class pet.
  1. Rabbit 
  2. Giny pig
  3. Brid 
  4. Fish. 
  5. Mouse                                                                                                                                                That could include clean the cage food for it  water and it needs to be heathy for it to have a long and happy life. I think that we could make a effort to look after the class pet.we won't a pet that everyone will look after the class pet.we will take responsibiland and take risks to look after the class pet.

1 comment:

  1. Thank you for your persuasive letter. You have listed out options well. To improve your punctuation add a semi-colon : at the end of this sentence: I think we should have one of these to have as a class pet:

    Challenge: Reread your sentences to make sure they all make sense.
    For example:
    That could include clean the cage food for it water and it needs to be heathy for it to have a long and happy life.

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